How to Present Attention-Getting Illustrations
In addition to careful selection and pains-taking
preparation, attention-getting illustrations must be
effectively presented. Failure to follow proven principles
of presentation causes illustrations to detract from the
truth, rather than illuminate it.
An attention-getting illustration is usually brief. The
longer the illustration, the more difficult it is to
present it well and maintain the hearers’ attention. The
result may be that the illustration, intended to attract
and enlighten the hearers, will lose them. When a brief
illustration fails, the preacher may recover with another
illustration, or make the point in another way. When a long
illustration fails, the preacher is stuck and the sermon
fails. Because lengthy illustrations gobble up time, which
is the preacher’s most precious commodity, the preacher
must be certain that it is worth the investment.
An attention-getting illustration is credited to its
source. Remember, however, that the sermon is not a written
presentation where credit can be given in a footnote.
Credit should be brief, no more than is necessary to
acknowledge the source. Footnote materials in a sermon are
no more interesting than reading footnote materials in a
book.
An attention-getting Illustration fits naturally into the
sermon material. It is an integral part of the sermon’s
flow from introduction to conclusion; it is not an
interruption. Introductions to illustrations are
illustration killers. “A few years ago while I was
travelling in Texas, I preached in a small west Texas town
where I met John Doe, who is a second cousin to Don Joe. He
is married to Joe Don’s sister who is known to many of you.
While eating a meal in their home, John’s uncle, who was
visiting from Oklahoma told me about an old Indian chief
who. . . .” You get the idea. Not only does such babble
waste time, worse yet, it detracts from the point being
made. It forces the hearers’ minds both to wander and to
wonder.
An attention-getting illustration is specific, not general.
It is a rifle, not a shotgun; it is a laser beam, not a
fluorescent light. Honing an illustration to a keen edge
requires extra thought and preparation time, but it adds
authenticity than can be gained in no other manner.
An attention-getting illustration shows rather than tells.
Daniel 2:12 records that “the king was angry and very
furious.” If the preacher wants his hearers to “see” the
king, he will show them the king in words – “The king’s
face turned red; he clinched his teeth; he doubled his
fist; he pounded the throne.”
An attention-getting illustration appeals to both intellect
and emotion. Appeal to emotion alone is like cotton candy –
mostly air. Appeal to intellect alone is like seeking
sustenance from a tasteless tablet – very unappealing.
An attention-getting illustration is more than just an
allusion. A passing mention is ineffective if the hearers
don’t know the story. The more details an illustration
contains (without violating the rule that an
attention-getting illustration is brief), the more it
engages the memories and emotions of the hearers.
An attention-getting illustration is about people, not
things. While “oil and water don’t mix” is a well-known
maxim, it is not as powerful as “trying to blend Rush
Limbaugh and Larry King.” Which of your vacation
photographs are more interesting – those with only
landscapes, or those in which your fellow travellers also
appear?
An attention-getting Illustration ends with words that tie
it to the point being made. If it does not add to and make
the point being illustrated, it dangles sorely – an
irritating hangnail on the sermon. Instead of assisting in
the transition from the known to the unknown, it is a dam
in the sermon’s stream that is impossible for the hearer to
circumnavigate.
Well planned and presented illustrations breathe life into
a sermon. They do the same for the hearers!